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如果您自己完成了留学文件，对文件内容结构等方面比较满意，而对英语表达难以把握，那么，留学文书英语润色（polish）服务能够为您扫除后顾之忧。
外语专业的毕业生写出来的英语大多也是“中国英语”，和真正地道的英语表达在行文的流畅性，用词的准确性和文章的感染力等方面依然有很大差距。一般非英语专业的申请者更常见的弊端是：用词过于生僻，通俗或华丽，语感别扭，不连贯，和中英思维方式差异带来的背离原意，语义难懂等。
不论您的文件内容如何，蹩脚的英文表达乃至失误会使录取人员看您的申请材料的过程变得很“痛苦”，造成教授对您理解的偏差，或者对您英文表达能力的怀疑，都会使申请效果大打折扣。联合译通的英语母语写作专家从事的主要工作既是帮助同样英语为母语的顾客修改润色文章，他们对于英语精准的感觉，深厚的功底一定能够让您的留学文件如虎添翼，马到功成。
母语写作专家在语言层面进行润色的优点？
我们的翻译专家认为中国申请人写作的英语从用词到句子结构普遍生硬，语言逻辑是“中文的”，离纯正有力英语差距很大。联合译通的文件润色修改服务不是简单的换词和纠正语法错误，而是以纯正的书面英语标准进行修改，彻底根除英文表达方面的种种弊端。
说明：润色服务并不涉及文件内容的修改。我们多年来接到很多要求对文件进行内容修改的请求，但内容修改是需要对客户的综合背景进行全面的了解，仅仅根据客户提供的现成文件这样残缺信息是无法进行内容修改的，任何这样的服务都很难说是负责的。加之客户的原始文件在内容上良莠不齐，工作量无法确定，因此对自己写作内容难以把握的客户请选择原创写作服务。
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| When most of people of my own age only focus on increasing material wealth for themselves, the words including ideal, conscience and sense of responsibility which were branded in my heart still have an incomparable lure to me. I walked through a long way before I can stand in front of the gate of Stanford, and the gate to my ideal. |
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When the sole focus of most people in my age group is wealth gathering, phrases such as ideal, conscience and sense of responsibility that have imprinted in my heart and soul during my youth still have an incomparable appeal. That is why I walked through a long way before I can stand in front of the gate of Stanford, and the gate to my ideal. |
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So I chose MBA course in which I got systemic training about commercial knowledge. Meanwhile I saw clearly that the sheer commercial training could not only benefit society but could push people to the devil’s side if it would not controlled by individual self-cultivation and social norms such as sense of society, moral baseline, business responsibility boundary. For example, financial derivatives are easily made use of by makers of game regulations and used to rob the wealth to social vulnerable groups at legal name.
I still remember the destination that I will reach. I thought it should be my business to seek in the future to let the astute people who mastered commercial knowledge known where their responsibilities are.
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I therefore selected a MBA course of which I received systemic knowledge and business training. At the same time, I came to clear realization that without the restraint of the social responsibility, the moral bottom line, corporate responsibility, personal behavior and acceptable social conduct, this training may not benefit the society, instead it will likely to bring out the evil side of human behavior. For example, rule makers are likely to take advantage of financial derivatives and use legitimized methods to rob the disadvantaged group.
I still remember the destination that I aim to reach. I thought it should be my career goal to pursue in the future to help people who highly mastered the complicated commercial knowledge to see their responsibilities. |
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